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Critique by ~6Murdok6 Nov 9, 2012, 7:46:26 AM
This is such an original idea! the fact that the fruit is being thrown out of the glass, or at least that is how I read it. I would like to see a little more gradual progression in the shading on the fruit, it feels a little choppy and would help with the feeling of movement of it flying through the air.
The water has an amazing quality to it as well. I am wondering a little about the shading there but tied with the title it reads fine. I do wonder what would happen if you had some of the water flying off the page to activate the border if it would help the composition.
I would love for everyone to look at your use of line wight (especially in the glass)... Not many pieces handle line as delicately and as well as you have in this drawing :D

I do believe this is my first critique if you have any questions or don't agree with something that I have said please let me know! I would love to hear from you.
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~sockstealingnome Dec 22, 2012
Very abstract. That's one way to utilize the least amount of lines and shading to create a coherent piece. I especially like the movement you captured of the water. Is it splashing onto some kind of fruit?
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*MSamsonov Dec 22, 2012  Professional Traditional Artist
It all depends on the imagination of the viewer. One man saw the bird here =).
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*Marievarp Dec 17, 2012  Student Traditional Artist
Wow! Amazing drawing!
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*MSamsonov Dec 19, 2012  Professional Traditional Artist
thank you!
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Mood: Adoration ~NDLevett Nov 30, 2012  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Дуже оригінальна робота , зразу ж захопила мою увагу. Мені дуже содобалось, як Ви передали динаміку руху, чудова картина, продовжуйте у тому ж дусі!!!!
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*MSamsonov Nov 30, 2012  Professional Traditional Artist
Дякую, в мене є ще одна картина руху води в кольорі =) Протягом місяця вона з'явится на DA ;)
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~NDLevett Nov 30, 2012  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Чекаю з нетерпінням, чудова робота)))
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~EricDaneislovex3 Nov 30, 2012
This caught my eye will be favoriting
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*MSamsonov Nov 30, 2012  Professional Traditional Artist
=)
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~Howard0 Nov 24, 2012
good enough
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